You feel you’re trembling,
You hear your heart’s mumbling,
As you hear or see “the person” around,
A silence sets in shy and profound.
For that special one, reasons unsaid,
Your lips don’t, your eyes talk instead.
A mixed feeling- both tense and delight,
It makes you happy ,crazy and elite.
Hush! Go slow, Do not rush.
Enjoy the bliss of teenage crush.
PS: 1. Blatantly copied the last 2 lines from somewhere! :)
2. Sushma's parody of "DESI GIRL" rocks! :D
3. Looks like Kangna's hairstyle in "FASHION" is the in-thing now!...courtesy:- Kodali Divya. ;)
4. Written upon readers' demand!
anduke paddu matterlo help cheyamante nuvvemo cheyatam ledu :P
ReplyDeleteinthki aa parody enti ?
very good rhythm ... migata vatilo kanna deentlo rhyming bavundi, words correct ga place ayyay :)
ReplyDelete@Ambati : moham paguluddi ra baava saale! neekeppudo cheppa kada bey, malli malli doori potav! hannaa!! aa parody nee meede nanta, a token of ladies[1] contribution for ambati bhajans.
[1] AFAIK, sisters' contrib! note apostrophe on the left of s.
exactly Anu :) loved the line "A silence sets in shy and profound"... the feeling is awesome ;)
ReplyDeletethe narration is simply superb!!! you putforth all those teenage feelings right out thr :).. keep writing...
best till date..
ReplyDeletefeelings ni baga capture chesav experience tone raasav ani ardam aindi.. kaadante oppukonu... ee maata kaamaata.. last 2 lines keka unnayi :P
btw lips meeda oka sigguto koodina smile vastadi danni kooda ekkadanna irikinchi unte baa undedi.. ;)
@ambati.. neeku ladies nundi help dorakadam leda... shavva.. bhoomi antam aipovadam ledu kada suma...
wonderful poem !! well if the last two lines would not have been there then this could have been valid for any crush :D !!
ReplyDelete@ Ambati Kalyan
ReplyDeleteNuvveamanna Arya anukuntunnaavaa baabuu !! pellavvabotunna vaallani lepukupodaaniki ! ( oka saari ninnu hero gaa petti Arya cinema chuusesaa neeku telikundaa. sry yee :-P )
paddu matter antee ... aame thoo rakhi kattinchukovalani trying kaadu kadaa !! ;-)
>> rohit's
>> >> feelings ni baga capture chesav experience tone raasav ani ardam aindi.. kaadante oppukonu…
yeah !! kaadante nenu kuuda oppukonu :-)
Great piece of work!! Can i hold the copyrights for publishing all your poems?? :D
ReplyDelete2nd poem by a batch mate on the same day. nice! Liked this line the most
ReplyDelete"For that special one, reasons unsaid,
Your lips don’t, your eyes talk instead."
Why don't all of us budding poets get together for a poetry reading session sometime? Maybe sometime after the placements.
r u still a teenager :O
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