Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Unfriendly friends!

waves

Slowly I rise, trying to reach the shore ahead,

High I swing, curvaceous as I’ve ever been,

With all my energy I dart forward,

Excited and enthusiastic like I’m always seen.


But none knows the real me,

I’m lonesome ,to no place I belong,

The shore never embraces me,

The sea too hates me strong.


Myriad like me,under the sea,

Struggling hard to be owned ,

the only thing that binds us is,

the friends for which we moan.


I love the shore,

It's the hope which keeps me alive.

I also love the sea,

It shelters me and thats where I dive.


Had shore kept me for herself,

I wouldn't have rouse again.

Had sea kept me for herself,

I would've lived in her with no pain.


All have such unfriendly friends,

its a pity if you don't,

Make sure you find one

to keep yourself going,

Otherwise I bet you wont :)

7 comments:

  1. chala kalam taravatha anukuntaga... nice one. kani ardam chesukotanake 3 times chadavalsi vachindi.... prasa bagundi n bhavam kooda bagundi. inthaki manaki entha mandi vunnarenti alanti unfriendly friends :D.

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  2. Nice come back anu :)
    Bombay situation gurincha enti ee bhaavaavesalu ;)

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  3. అంతా బావుంది.. కాని చివర్లో అలాంటి స్నేహితులు కాని స్నేహితులు ఉండటం వల్ల మనసుకేదో ఒరిగినట్టే రాశావ్.. వాళ్ళ వల్ల అల తన బ్రతుకీడుస్తుందనడంలో ఆశ్చర్యం లేదు.. కాని, సంతోషంగా ఉంది అని అంటే ఆశ్చర్యంగా ఉంది..

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  4. nenu kuda santoshamga untundi anatledu..
    dani batuku lo unna challenges ki avi karanam antunna..
    ala undali antunna

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  5. good and strange ! i wrote a similar theme poem recently too :) ..though the background setting is a tad diff

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  6. real gud.. its been very long since I read a simple poem which made sense and could relate to straight away :)
    keep going..

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  7. Nice work, regards

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