Wednesday, April 30, 2008

My computer!

Damn this machine,
I wish that they sell it.
It does everything else,
except what I tell it.

I do often hit it hard,
to make it know I'm hurt.
I neither bathe it nor dust it,
despite its filth and dirt.

I always think it has lost,
just because its dumb.
it shows those Godly errors,
which make my senses numb.

Then it looks victorious,
and smiles at me with triumph.
I give it a nasty look
and say "thats enough".

Yet I love this idiot,
Its my best friend ever.
It shares my interests and secrets
and we will part never!

With all this love,
I get back to my routine.
Lo! another error,
God damn this machine! :-(
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21 comments:

  1. ambatiApril 30, 2008 at 6:21 AM

    kummesav anu. first line 2 last line chaduvuthunnantha sepu navvuthoone vunna.
    "I wish that they sell it. It does everything else, except what I tell it." idi keka. climax aithe cheppakarla rachalu. totalga kummesav anthe.

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  2. kdivyaApril 30, 2008 at 6:25 AM

    Nice post anu! :-)

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  3. DivyaApril 30, 2008 at 6:45 AM

    Bagundi...chaaaaala bagundi!! [:P]
    Entayina naa tho tirigi tirigi neelo talent kooda ila bayata padutondi
    Parledu... payikostaavu

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  4. KuKaKiApril 30, 2008 at 6:57 AM

    @ Mr. Ambati antha avasaram ledu ! baagundi ante saripotundi ..

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  5. prashastiApril 30, 2008 at 7:06 AM

    awesome post da...

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  6. DivyaApril 30, 2008 at 7:12 AM

    Nenu raasa ga...inka naa peru tho nuvvu raaskundi delete chesesko

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  7. anupamaApril 30, 2008 at 7:19 AM

    @KuKaKi
    nuvvu evaro naku teleedu..
    niku nachakapote nahchaledu ani rayi..
    asayyam ga vundi ani rayi..
    ledante chadivesi edchindile ani vadileyyi..
    tanaki emaina cheppali anukunte direct ga cheppu..naa blog lo enduku mee sambhashana ?
    bagundi anna ardam vahchindi..daniki matuku thank you.

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  8. gopalkoduriApril 30, 2008 at 7:48 AM

    nice one!

    @KuKaKi, arey ambati ki enduku antha nachindo obvious e kada.. vaadiki, laptop pattukuni service center ki povatame O kalakrutyam.. :P . anni sarlu edipinchina 'computer' meeda rasina poem ki, vaadu aa matram respond avatam ok ne gaa..

    @anupama, malli discussion ki sorry :)

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  9. SpeedApril 30, 2008 at 12:31 PM

    dejamu ..(but nice)

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  10. KuKaKiApril 30, 2008 at 7:37 PM

    yeah @ Mr. Gopal !! Im sry :(

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  11. Devansh MittalApril 30, 2008 at 9:19 PM

    Nice way of giving emotions to machine!
    Nice poem.

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  12. Kulbir SainiApril 30, 2008 at 9:19 PM

    OMG!! what a creativity :-O

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  13. bhargavaMay 1, 2008 at 5:03 AM

    nice poem. great creativity.

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  14. SrivatsavaMay 1, 2008 at 9:38 AM

    Damn this poem,
    I wish I could criticize it.
    It has everything else,
    except the reason for criticism in it .

    Keep writing :)

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  15. djrangaMay 1, 2008 at 9:51 AM

    good one .... keep writing ...

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  16. AnkitMay 2, 2008 at 2:56 AM

    another lovely poem ....
    very well depicts at least my relationship with my computer :D

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  17. AnupamaMay 2, 2008 at 11:48 AM

    @KuKaKi
    Sorry..I took your comment in a wrong way :)
    Really very sorry! :)

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  18. akshitaMay 2, 2008 at 1:41 PM

    a really pretty poem.. :)

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  19. Phani ChaitanyaMay 5, 2008 at 12:11 PM

    hmmm what all can I say after all these comments ... I think its pretty obvious from the above ones !! nice one anu.

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  20. rohitMay 6, 2008 at 6:39 AM

    :)

    gud one....!

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  21. VeeMay 21, 2008 at 10:08 PM

    nice creativity.. :)

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